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Kaleth Sylvia
by sank180 Sat Sep 05, 2015 7:50 pm
Name: Kaleth Sylvia
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Organization: unaffiliated
Kagune: Ukaku: 2 wing like kagune, similar to Ayato's wings. They are black edged and orange red in the middle. They are 4ft long. Able to shoot crystalline shards Kaleth uses her wings to move fast and hit from range occasionally darting in to hit her opponents. She can use them to glide.
Primary Stats: Speed, Attack, Stealth
Physical Description: She is 5'9" and weights 119lbs. She has long black hair that she wears straight down to the middle of her back. She is pale skinned and has blue eyes. She wears a gray tank top and loose fitting black pants. Often wears a black hoodie with the hood down. Her shoes are black sneakers. Her mask is a half mask decorated with black feathers.
Personality: Having grown up fighting ghouls she doesnt trust many of them. She enjoys to spend time with her friends but keeps a distance from them in case they find out what she is so that she doesnt feel too bad killing them or leaving them. She is a good friend to have in a fight. She tries to avoid fighting but when she must she holds nothing back. Often found either with her friends or working she fits into society fairly well. When she eats she tries to find those who wont be missed or goes to places where she knows people commit suicide. She is a bit icy to you unless you prove you are at least somewhat trust worthy. She avoids ghouls and thinks of herself as better than other ghouls. She appears as though she was just a normal member of society unless she is out eating.
History: Growing up as an orphan Kaleth had to fight for survival in the 14th ward. She was taken in by a local ghoul whose kid had been eaten. The kind old lady trained Kaleth how to fight and hunt and protected her. This lasted up until when Kaleth was 9 and her adopted mother died of old age. A year later while hunting for food she ran into a group of cannibal ghouls. The next 5 seconds changed Kaleth for ever. As the leader of the other ghouls rushed at her she cut him in half dodging his attack. Angered the other 3 ghouls chased her. On the run Kaleth killed them by picking them off one by one. The next day a larger group of ghouls came after her for revenge for their friends. She fought and killed as many as she could while running away. The ghouls stopped chasing her after she left their ward not wanting to be caught by the CCG. Upon entering the 20th ward she thought she might be safe. When Anteiku tried to talk to her she ran fearing they were going to eat her. Now having settled in the 19th ward she has begun to fit into a community. She eats when she feels the need to but tries to not eat too much to avoid drawing attention to herself. She goes to school and works for a local bookstore.
Residence: 19th ward
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Organization: unaffiliated
Kagune: Ukaku: 2 wing like kagune, similar to Ayato's wings. They are black edged and orange red in the middle. They are 4ft long. Able to shoot crystalline shards Kaleth uses her wings to move fast and hit from range occasionally darting in to hit her opponents. She can use them to glide.
Primary Stats: Speed, Attack, Stealth
Physical Description: She is 5'9" and weights 119lbs. She has long black hair that she wears straight down to the middle of her back. She is pale skinned and has blue eyes. She wears a gray tank top and loose fitting black pants. Often wears a black hoodie with the hood down. Her shoes are black sneakers. Her mask is a half mask decorated with black feathers.
Personality: Having grown up fighting ghouls she doesnt trust many of them. She enjoys to spend time with her friends but keeps a distance from them in case they find out what she is so that she doesnt feel too bad killing them or leaving them. She is a good friend to have in a fight. She tries to avoid fighting but when she must she holds nothing back. Often found either with her friends or working she fits into society fairly well. When she eats she tries to find those who wont be missed or goes to places where she knows people commit suicide. She is a bit icy to you unless you prove you are at least somewhat trust worthy. She avoids ghouls and thinks of herself as better than other ghouls. She appears as though she was just a normal member of society unless she is out eating.
History: Growing up as an orphan Kaleth had to fight for survival in the 14th ward. She was taken in by a local ghoul whose kid had been eaten. The kind old lady trained Kaleth how to fight and hunt and protected her. This lasted up until when Kaleth was 9 and her adopted mother died of old age. A year later while hunting for food she ran into a group of cannibal ghouls. The next 5 seconds changed Kaleth for ever. As the leader of the other ghouls rushed at her she cut him in half dodging his attack. Angered the other 3 ghouls chased her. On the run Kaleth killed them by picking them off one by one. The next day a larger group of ghouls came after her for revenge for their friends. She fought and killed as many as she could while running away. The ghouls stopped chasing her after she left their ward not wanting to be caught by the CCG. Upon entering the 20th ward she thought she might be safe. When Anteiku tried to talk to her she ran fearing they were going to eat her. Now having settled in the 19th ward she has begun to fit into a community. She eats when she feels the need to but tries to not eat too much to avoid drawing attention to herself. She goes to school and works for a local bookstore.
Residence: 19th ward
Last edited by sank180 on Sun Sep 06, 2015 6:47 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Kaleth Sylvia
by Live To Serve Sun Sep 06, 2015 1:23 pm
Right, technically everything is solid, but I would love to see more personality beyond things that just pertain to fighting. Furthermore, try a different history if you want a more unique and fulfilling character, as the classic "parents were killed, and I got revenge" backstory is very cliche. Just a friendly suggestion.
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